thesis sentence&topic sentence

Thesis Sentence:

       Celebrities’ bad behavior is covered more in news stories than positive behavior because its showing that they aren’t role models, its interesting, and makes people see the real them.

Topic sentence 1:

       First, bad behavior doesn’t show any good in the celebrities it shows not a good role model.

Topic sentence 2:

       Then, with the bad behavior it’s more interesting for the people to read what the celebrities did wrong than what they did well.

Topic sentence 3:

Finally, when you see the celebrities with bad behavior you can see the real them that they act like.

IA#2--->MY THESIS STATEMENT!--->PROMT 1

Famous people (celebrities) can also have bad behavior. Many people these days like to enjoy hot gossip of celebrities’ bad behavior. For example there money uses, secret life, and if they use drugs.

EVALUATE

MY RATING OF MYSELF FROM 1-6

•   Investigate? I GIVE MY SELF A 3 BECAUSE I DIDN’T REALLY INVESTIGATE ON WHAT 2 PRODUCTS THAT I WAS COMPARING.

Design? I GIVE MY SELF AN 4 BECUASUE I DID GOOD ON DESIGN MY PRODUCT I WAS DOING FOR MY PROJECT.

Plan-? I GIVE MY SELF AN 4.5 ON PLANNING MY MOVIE TO MAKE SURE I PUT ALL THE INNFORMATION YOU NEED FROM THE DESIGN CYCLE.

•   Create? I GAVE MY SELF AN 5 BECAUSE I DID REALLY GOOD ON  PUTTING THE INFORMATION IN THE RIGHT SLIDE AND MAKING SURE I CREATE THE RIGHT PRODUCT THAT WILL SHOW THE SIX GRADERS THE DESIGN CYCLE.

•     Evaluate? I GIVE MY SELF AN 3 ON EVALUTAING MY PRODUCT.

my final project

----->my final project<-----

what i am working on.

                Asking whats the design cycle.

Girl teaching guy whats the design cycle.

 learning about evaluate

create

The total project is 325 then divided by 60 which is equal to 6hours.

10/4: Plan & design
10/5: create the product
10/6: create the survey
10/7: Finish the survey & test it
10/8: evaluate