thesis sentence&topic sentence

Thesis Sentence:

       Celebrities’ bad behavior is covered more in news stories than positive behavior because its showing that they aren’t role models, its interesting, and makes people see the real them.

Topic sentence 1:

       First, bad behavior doesn’t show any good in the celebrities it shows not a good role model.

Topic sentence 2:

       Then, with the bad behavior it’s more interesting for the people to read what the celebrities did wrong than what they did well.

Topic sentence 3:

Finally, when you see the celebrities with bad behavior you can see the real them that they act like.